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Title:  Forty Days at Kamas        
Author:  Preston Fleming      
Publisher:  PF Publishing          
ISBN:   978-0-98295-940-4
Pages:  Kindle Edition
Genre:   Fiction
 
Reviewed by:  Brandon Nolta, Pacific Book Review
 
 
 
 
 

Review
 
 

The world of Preston Fleming’s dystopic novel Forty Days at Kamas is a far cry from the one we know. Canada and Mexico have been more or less annexed, America’s economy has completely collapsed and, in the wake of a turbulent series of troubles known simply as the Events, an authoritarian state has taken the reins, remaking America into a Soviet Union for a new century. As the story opens, Paul Wagner – a businessman sentenced to five years of hard labor for attempting to immigrate to England with his family – has just been transferred to a labor camp in Kamas, Utah, to serve out the rest of his sentence. However, despite his privations, Paul hasn’t given up on himself or his fellow man, and the confluence of unjust actions and strange visions combine to lead him down a path that might save him, or might push him into a stony grave in the windswept badlands of Utah.

 Fleming takes a big chance with this book; dystopias are a dime a dozen in speculative fiction, and the heavy frontloading of political content and framing quotes in each chapter run the risk of bludgeoning readers with the political themes until the story is lost, e.g., Ayn Rand. Fortunately, despite some on-the-nose dialogue and the occasional heavy-handed point – the beginning quotes underline the ideas over and over – Fleming mostly avoids making his narrative too didactic. The story moves along at a solid clip, and the switches in point of view throughout the book make narrative and logical sense. Fleming’s writing is crisp and concise, and never strays too far into melodrama or lecturing. Even the political infodumps are handled with a sense of efficiency and subtlety.

This sense of efficiency extends to the characters as well. Although none of the characters are exactly well-rounded, Fleming gives them enough verve and perception to meet the story’s needs, and his ability to establish voices and mannerisms helps keep things clear and moving toward the resolution. As a hero, Paul can be too passive; often, the critical action happens to him instead of because of him, but his suffering and internal reflections help put the events in context, and serve as further proof of how far the spirit of America has been shoved down in Fleming’s page-turner. While the ending can be seen as ambiguous in the larger sense, by the time readers reach the last page, Paul has found a well-earned sense of satisfaction, as will the readers. Despite the occasional ungainly note, Fleming has crafted an overtly political story that succeeds as entertainment.

 

 

 
 
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